今天給大家分析一道經(jīng)典難題,題目如下:
這道題讓我們描述一個(gè)去過還想再去一次的城市。大多數(shù)同學(xué)會(huì)把它說成回憶過去的經(jīng)歷,然后最后說一句:因?yàn)橥鎯旱煤荛_心,所以想再去一次。最后得了5.5分,都不知道是什么原因。
我們重新來看一下這道題:
Describea city that you have been to and would like to visit again.
這個(gè)標(biāo)題的動(dòng)詞運(yùn)用了兩個(gè)時(shí)態(tài):have been to 現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)和would like to一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。也就是說,我們?cè)诖痤}的過程中,是不能把過去時(shí)態(tài)作為答題主體的,將來時(shí)態(tài)的部分至少也要占50%的比重。如果是讓我們描述一個(gè)過去的旅行經(jīng)歷,這道題會(huì)設(shè)計(jì)成“Describea city you visited that you like/dislike.”
因此,朋友們,審題太重要了。
接下來,我們看標(biāo)題下面的要求,一共四個(gè)小問題,前三個(gè)是過去時(shí)態(tài),最后一個(gè)是將來時(shí)態(tài),讓我們解釋原因。
大家知道,part2話題的最后一問一般都是最重要的一問,也是我們應(yīng)該在兩分鐘的答題過程中,花最多時(shí)間去描述的一部分。因此,將來時(shí)態(tài)絕對(duì)應(yīng)該是這道題的一個(gè)主要答題時(shí)態(tài)。
在一邊回憶過去的旅行經(jīng)歷,一邊暢想下次再去一次的想象中,這道題就順利完成了。接下來給大家分享我的答題素材。
This city is Barcelona. I went there about four years ago with my ex-boyfriend. Wevisited museums and ate some delicate local food. However, we had disagreements about whether to visit the famous Segrada Familia ornot. Eventually, we both thought we would go back to Barcelona again some time in the future, so we didn’t go to that church.It turned out to bea wrong decision because we broke up and we are never ever getting back together and I am definitely not visiting the city with him again. In spite of this unhappy ending of our story, I still want tovisit Barcelona if there is a chance in the future. It doesn’t matter if it’s in one year or five years. I would go.I want to see the Segrada Familia and I want to see a bull fight and flamenco. I want to see Spanish women dancing like there’s no tomorrow. I am crazy about the Spanish culture. There are too many things I didn’t do when I visited the city for the first time and I had some bad memories that made me can’t forget this city.I want to visit it again because I want a better memory for myself and a much better experience when I am richer and could be able to afford better hotelsand fancier food. It’s a city full of artistic elements and enthusiastic citizens. I feel I would fall in love with it again.That’s what I want to say about this topic. Thank you.
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